Yesterday we wrote some terrific introduction to our recounts about the first day of school...
The Big Wednesday - By Max
As I walked in my legs were trembling and my hands were sweating. Right before me stood my tall teacher Miss Slater.
The Mysterious Day - By Star and Sarah
STOMP! STOMP! STOMP! Mum came down the hallway and into my room. Then I heard a loud furious voice, "Get OUT of your bed, your alarm clock went off at 6:30!"
The Terrifying First Day - By Jayda
Ring, Ring! The bell had rung. It was time to meet my new teacher. My heart was bouncing, my legs were shaking, my neck was sweating. I was asking myself all these questions. I stepped in the class, this was the most nervous I had ever been.
The Big Day! By Tom
I woke up on the big day. I was terrified and excited at the same time. All I could think about was what my classroom would look like. I had a feeling that today was going to be really good.
I loved how descriptive G4 were in writing about their first day of School. Keep up the fantastic writing....
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