Thursday, 29 March 2012

Metaphor Poems

Nature By Leon
The sun was a pineapple burning yellow,
The twisted trees were the claws of a lion in a den,
The drifting boat was a bird catching fish for dinner,
The moon was a star bursting with light
 

Animals By Ali
The cheetah is a Ferrari racing through the planet,
The falcon is a jet hovering past the country side,
The parrot is a printer copying every accent and word,
The snake is a rope tangling around everything,
The chameleon is a camouflaged intruder

Science By Matthew F
The test tube was a vase of bubbly liquid waiting to be drunk,
Th baking soda and vinegar volcano was a mountain that was about to explode,
The crystals were weeds growing in the rocks,
The bottle rocket was a plant going straight up into the air,
The microscope was a magnifying glass searching for tiny things

Light Life, Dark Death By Griffin
Light is a firework sparkling in the air,
Life is a happy face shining at you,
Dark is your worst nightmare waiting to trap you,
The sun is a friend getting rid of your dark spots,
Life is a gift, being unwrapped

Nature By Jasmine, Olivia L and Isabelle
The sun is a huge apricot buring in the atmosphere,
The fog is a ghost floating through the city,
The twisted trees are witches pointy fingers casting a spell,
The drifting boat is rubbish drifting in the sea,
The moon is a blob of paint floating in the galaxy,
The autumn leaved are ripped paper floating in the sky

Animals By Olivia C
The cat was a robber looking for food,
The fluffy rabbit is a cuddley coat,
The frog is slimy into jumping into the water

Storms By Antony
The sapphire blue sky is a ocean spreading through the air,
The sinister storm clouds were black blankets covering the sky,
The lightning was a meteroite bolting to the ground,
The thunder was a cry unknown for centuries,
The tornado was a vacuum cleaner, destroying everything in its path

Star By Anqi
Star is a star shimmering in the night sky,
Her brain is a machine doing all the work,
Our friendship is a lock that would never break,
Her eyes are sparkling blue water,
Her smile is the first ray of the sun

Animals By Rosemary
The bunny's tail was delicious candyfloss,
The cat was a ferocious mad tiger,
The hamster was a humongous ball of fluff,
The panda was a snugly teddy bear,
The golden retriever was a fast cheetah galloping in the sunlight,
The seahorse was a rainbow glinting across the sky


4 comments:

  1. Rosemary and Jayda3 April 2012 at 9:23 am

    Wow we have amazing writers in G4.Can't wait intill next term and learn different poems.

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  2. Rosemary,Olivia, and Hayley4 April 2012 at 2:40 pm

    WOW those were interesting poems I didn't know we had such fantastic poets

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  3. look what i have done

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  4. Here I am thousands of kilometers away but I am still able to enjoy your creative poetry. Excellent writing G 4.

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